Persuasive Essay

What did I learn? I learnt how to use different descriptive words in a paragraph.
Why did we do it as a class? Idk I think because most of us have trouble on writing paragraphs and we needed help so we did it as a class to get everyone ideas and to help us think more clearly.
What will I do better next time? Use different words to start my sentences and use more descriptive words.
What questions dill I still have? I have no questions.

Hornby high students should be able to
leave school to get their own food

*Some students are responsible enough to do this.

*This will allow students more choice for food than what the canteen offers

*Students should be allowed B.K dropped off by a caregivers,as
sometimes there’s no time in the morning

*Students may not come back,and therefore bunk

*Could use leaving school as an incentive-in the english CARR licenses

*Should not leave the school grounds-Students need to
support the school canteen.

More choice,more time,more responsibility.

Students from Hornby High should be allowed to
leave the school grounds to buy food.This will enable
students to have more food options,more time options
,and the opportunity to show responsibility.

Hornby students want a greater variety of food.

For example,year 10’s prefer eating pies,energy
drinks,Doritos, and burgers.Other year groups desire
these foods also.This will make the students happier
outside of class and would result in them having a better
attitude in class.Teachers get to choose what they want to
eat,So why shouldn’t us students?

Not only would be allowing students to go out of
school any give

them more choice, it would also allow caregivers
more options around time management.For instance
,letting students pick up their lunch or takeaways from
outside of school during lunch it will permit caregivers,
the flexibility of time in this busy world.This will help
caregivers have the opportunity to be on time with
other appointments,if they didn’t have time to make
lunch in the morning.Surely we want to have happy
caregivers and students at hornby high, by allowing
them this liberty?

As well as more choices and flexibility around time
, we want Hornby students to become more responsible
as young adults.To illustrate this,Hornby High English
learners in years nine and ten have more opportunities
,chances and privileges around their decisions to learn
through a CARR license system.The student will either
be on a learners,restricted,full or expert licence with
responsible actions and consequences from being
in class. 100% of students in 10DA thought that students
on the expert license should be able to leave school at
lunch to get the food they desire.Responsibility shown
in the class should be rewarded with responsibility outside of class.

Responsible teenagers at Hornby High school should
definitely be able to leave school to get food.This
would mean more choice,time,and rewards for our
akonga.If we want 21st century learners,we must
change with the times.